tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907319066217952721.post6723416464298523965..comments2008-12-17T05:04:00.205-08:00Comments on Lorena W: WRITING PROMPT: The MetamorphosisLorenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14550244657937942626noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907319066217952721.post-15995512614089923742008-12-17T05:04:00.000-08:002008-12-17T05:04:00.000-08:00-need to include the author's name at the begi...-need to include the author's name at the beginning of the 1st paragraph.<BR/><BR/>-avoid being vague & using cliches [ex. a cockroach/beetle type insect]<BR/><BR/>-capitalize the entire title. [The Metamorphosis].<BR/><BR/>-probably a 6 or 7.Lorenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14550244657937942626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907319066217952721.post-43440957525999952102008-12-17T04:53:00.000-08:002008-12-17T04:53:00.000-08:00also I would grade your writing as a 5-6also I would grade your writing as a 5-6Brittaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14069027278848433342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907319066217952721.post-2789168107701538972008-12-17T04:51:00.000-08:002008-12-17T04:51:00.000-08:00avoid cliche and when your finishing your pargraph...avoid cliche and when your finishing your pargraphs dont use run on sentences.kristalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16360537382192468010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907319066217952721.post-43120458659748517682008-12-16T10:14:00.000-08:002008-12-16T10:14:00.000-08:00Capitalize the when talking about the novel. In th...Capitalize the when talking about the novel. In the first sentence the author is suppose to be spoken. Avoid slang when talking about the bug. puncuation.<BR/>Run on sentences in the last paragraph.Brittaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14069027278848433342noreply@blogger.com